Hello Jason. Written words have a big role in understanding your intentions and feelings for the site. The collages are not very inspiring but are effective at showing what you feel. I would like to see the matrix and bubble diagrams as a result of your space organization analysis before the collages. Keep up the good work. ES
The collages are a great improvement, from what you had in class, especially the third one.You do need to verbally describe what they represent, so your audience understands. Keep going
I think your collages are a bit too literal. Granted, a culinary school (That's what you re researching right?) is a rather pragmatic building but breaking the mold is part of what makes cooking an evolving art.
I haven't seen any in between assignments. If you are behind I would suggest you catch up before work piles up on you.
Hello Jason.
ReplyDeleteWritten words have a big role in understanding your intentions and feelings for the site.
The collages are not very inspiring but are effective at showing what you feel.
I would like to see the matrix and bubble diagrams as a result of your space organization analysis before the collages.
Keep up the good work.
ES
The collages are a great improvement, from what you had in class, especially
ReplyDeletethe third one.You do need to verbally describe what they represent, so your audience understands.
Keep going
Hi Jason,
ReplyDeleteI think your collages are a bit too literal. Granted, a culinary school (That's what you re researching right?) is a rather pragmatic building but breaking the mold is part of what makes cooking an evolving art.
I haven't seen any in between assignments. If you are behind I would suggest you catch up before work piles up on you.